In 30 or 60 seconds, a good radio ad grabs attention, involves a listener, sounds believable, creates a mental picture, spins a story, calls for
action, and manages to keep the product on center stage and the customer in the spotlight — all without sounding pushy, screamy, obnoxious, or
Done perfectly, a radio ad is a one-on-one conversation with a single target prospect, written and produced so well that the prospect hears the
introduction and says, in essence, "Ssshhh, be quiet, you guys, I need to hear this. It’s talking to me."
Writing to be heard
Great writers tell you to write out loud when you create radio ads. Here’s how:
Use straightforward language that is written exactly how people talk.
Write to the pace people talk, not to the pace at which they read.
People need time to think, and the announcer needs time to breathe.
Cut extra verbiage.
You wouldn’t say indeed, thus, moreover, or therefore if you were explaining something exciting to a friend, so
don’t do it in your radio script, either.
Rewrite elaborately constructed sentences.
Don’t expect listeners to track through phrases linked together with who, which, and whereas. Instead of
The new fashions, which just came off the Paris runways where they made international news, are due to arrive in Chicago tomorrow at
The newest Paris runway fashions arrive in Chicago tomorrow at noon. You’re invited to a premiere of the world’s leading looks.
Tell listeners what to do next.
Prepare them to take down your phone number (Have a pencil handy?),
or at least repeat your number for them. Most important, help them remember your name so they can find you in the phone book
or online. (Warning: Don’t waste radio time telling people to look us up in the Yellow Pages,
especially if your competitors overshadow your presence there.)
Radio do’s and don’ts
Use the following checklist of ideas to employ and landmines to avoid:
Do stick with a single theme in each ad.
Do make a simple offer that calls for immediate action.
Do generate leads by making no-risk offers for free estimates, free brochures, or free information.
Do limit a 30-second ad to 60 or 70 words unless it includes an intentionally rapid-fire conversation.
Do use radio as a complement to other advertising: Look for our coupon in Friday’s paper.
Do say your name three times.
Do match your ad to the format of the stations you air it on. If you advertise on a country western station, you’ll hardly want an ad with
new-age music in the background.
Don’t expect the ad to make the sale; use it to make the contact.
Don’t advertise products with a bunch of disclaimers.
Don’t fast-talk the prospect.
Don’t use incomprehensible jingles.
Don’t use weak attempts at humor.
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